Comment Summary

Today I read three wonderful stories all inspired by unique objects. One was written inspired by a pocket watch, another about a coffee stick, and the last was based on Cuban cigars. Each story brought a wonderful and creative take to their individual object and captured the readers attention. I especially like how Emma was influenced from several bits of information and objects from her real life. It made the story more interesting and helped personalize the story. Overall, every post I read today was very good and I enjoyed reading all of them!

Emma H.

Hello there,
This story was very entertaining. You had great voice throughout and gave a good perspective of an interesting tale. I loved how the different aspects of this story related to real events and objects in your life. I look forward to seeing more of your work!
Sincerely,
Ben LeMon

Taylor D.
Hello there,
I enjoyed your story immensely. You kept me intrigued throughout the story. I loved how you incorporated the coffee stick into it! Your writing style was perfect for the tone of the paper and it allowed for a story that was easy to follow and fast paced. Thank you for sharing!
Ben LeMon

Zachary B.
Hello there,
Thank you for such a interesting story. It was unique and caught my attention right away. I enjoyed your descriptive writing style and found your entire piece fascinating to read. Keep up the good work!
Ben LeMon