Comment Summary

These are the comments I posted on Riley's blog:

Hello there, 
Nice job of this piece Riley! I like how you personified the lights and gave them there own unique personality. It helped lighten up your story and added a little humor at the same time. Keep up the good work!-Ben

Hello there, 
Well done Riley. This story is was very entertaining and it was nice to finally find out how Owl Pichino came to be himself. The sick owl puns also helped keep the reader interested. I also liked the star wars references you threw in there. I especially liked the line, "I'm not talking Star Wars, although I was a Sith Lord for a little later on down this rocky road we call life, I'm talking police force." Nice work and keep it up man.
-Ben

Hello there,
I really liked this article. It had a little something for everyone. It was really nice to see so many characters come together in one story. It was truly riveting. There were so many twist and turns that I did not know what was going to happen next. Anytime the my attention started to fade you brought in a new character or setting which helped keep me interested and made this story that much better. I hope to see more of this in the future. Good work!
-Ben

These are the comments I posted on Riley's blog:

Hello there,
Good work of this post! It was very entertaining and your responses seemed very thoughtful. I liked how you said, "My best hiding spots as a kid were in really small spaces like cabinets under the sink because I was really small." I also remember doing that as a kid and how fun it was to play. Your post was very relatable and helped for a connection between the author and the reader. Nice Job!
-Ben

Hello there, 
Nice work as usual. It is so nice to see another fan of Toby McGuire. He was a close second to who I would want to play me in a movie. In addition, I agree with what you said about how you could not pick you favorite movie because there are so many. I also find this hard because there are so many good movies to chose from. Nice work.
-Ben

Hello there,
I thought you raised some good questions and would also be interested in how much a typical author makes off of a children's book. I would also agree that life never turns out how we plan and we just have to make do with what we have. You gave good and meaningful advice. Keep it up!
-Ben

These are the comments I posted on Josh's blog:

Hello there, 
I liked how creative your post was. It was spooky and the plot of your story was very interesting. I also thought that the specific potion and details you listed really added to the Halloween spirit.
-Ben

Hello there,
Nick job on this post! I also agree that "movies that keep the viewer wondering what could possibly happen next and ones that make you think about how it could have gone any better or worse for the characters" are the best movies around. In addition I also like to have a comfy seat when I am watching movies. Keep up the good work.
-Ben

Hello there,

Nice Job! I enjoyed this piece quite a bit. I can relate to climbing trees as a child because I also used to do that. Overall, a very good post and keep up the good work.

-Ben